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Thursday, April 16, 2020

persuasive planning



Topic: Should we stay in isolation longer than 4 weeks?
Pro (agree/positive things)
Con (disagree/negative things)
MONEY
  •  Don’t have to spend a lot of money
  •  Save money because I can’t go shopping/not paying for petrol
  • Government is giving people a ‘wage subsidy’ if they lose their jobs so they can still pay their bills and get food

RELAX/FUN/HOLIDAYS
  •  Lots of naps during the day
  • Get to watch lots of TV 
  •  Nobody can tell you to go play outside because you aren’t allowed outside

FAMILY/WHANAU/SOCIAL
  • Look after mum,dad,sisters and brother.
  •  Spend time with family
  • Family day
  • Play games with family.
  • The longer we are in lockdown the more spending time with family.
  • Have fun with family.
  • To stay with your family's more

CHORES
  •  More time to clean house


SAFETY 
  • Staying safe from strangers
  • The more you follow the law the more that the lockdown will be shorter.
  • Stay 2 meter away from strangers.
  • Less chances on getting  corona

SCHOOL
  • Not going to school 
  •  Miss my friends
  • I Miss going on trips.
  • Swimming got canceled
  • Miss school
  • Your parents tell you to do too much work

FOOD /RESOURCES
  •  Cooking at home - I miss takeaways lol
  • I miss burger kings, and other food.🍔

  • Might run out of food
  • Running out of toilet paper.

ENTERTAINMENT/TIME
  • Boring  if you didn’t have internet
  • Not Going to akedo sessions (weekend/after school activities)
  • Not being able to play sports
  • Not being able to go 
  • Have to do chores - toilets.
  • Not being able to go to parks to see friends

TRAVEL
  •  I Miss going on trips.
  •  Not being able to see other family members
  •  Miss seeing friends in reality
  • Family games
  • I miss spending time on birthdays. (no parties)😭

  • Can’t travel - can’t visit people overseas
  • Can't get over seas to see family's member
  • People can’t travel around the world
  • Towns getting closed.🗺️


BUSINESSES
  • The longer the lockdown goes, the harder it will be for them to reopen. 
  • Not enough money to pay their workers.

MEDICAL
  • People not being able to get healed because doctors closed

  • We have a timer./2:00hors

Intro 
  • Statement
  • Opinion
  • Reasons

New Zealand is currently in its 3rd week of a strict lockdown during the Coronavirus Pandemic. A highly debated topic is “Should lockdown last more than 4 weeks?-”. I think it should/should not last longer than 4 weeks. 

Pro: People’s money is heavily impacted, they have to stay home in their “bubbles” with their families, but it keeps them safe. 

Con: Children can’t go to school, people might run out of food or other resources, and can’t travel.


Here is our 
New Zealand is currently in its 3rd week of a strict lockdown during the Coronavirus Pandemic. A highly debated topic is “Should lockdown last more than 4 weeks?-”. I think it should last longer than 4 weeks. People’s money is heavily impacted, they have to stay home in their “bubbles” with their families, but it keeps them safe. 


P1: Money We don't have to spend a lot of money on petrol and everything else and if we don't have money we get free money from the government. 

P2: Bubbles We get to spend a lot of time with our family like playing a card game

P3: Keeping safe staying  2 m away from people is a good idea so that you don't get coronavirus and don't go by strangers.  

Conclusion: In conclusion, I think it will be best if the lockdown lasts longer than 4 weeks so we can all be protected from Coronavirus.






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