‘It the day wake up’ said Skey. Jake and Jane got in the car. Skey was going to drive to the skydiving place. It was an hour drive but it may take a little longer if there are a lot of cars. The drive was very long and boring. The three friends tried to cheer each other up when they were in the car.
Beep Beep Skey was parked in the parking lot ‘were here! Jake said not quite said Skey we are out of gas and were looking for a gas station we really need gas our gas sign is on one we don’t want to be stake in the middle of the road. ‘Found one’ said Jane Skey parked in the parking lot of the gas station. Soon after the three friends drove off to the sky diving place very soon Jake and Jane fell asleep.
‘Wakeup were here!!! Said Skey, Jake and Jane jumped up and walked to the station. They put on the suits and shoes and were taught how to do a skydiving very soon sky, jack, and Jane walk to the plane with some other people it was a 3 minutes to 4 minutes plane ride then the pilot told everyone to jump off Skey, Jake and Jane jumped at the same time and had a blast then the there friend went home.
wow amazing story next time use headings
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